There are some really beautiful descriptions and settings in this. I would paste some examples, but I don't want to spoil them. I also really like the structure. I didn't expect it to be the type of comparative chronicle that it is, and I love how its meaning builds and deepens with each section without making direct references, just simple juxtaposition. Really nice.
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So lovely and melancholy... going to replay more slowly to savor it!
Thank you!!
There are some really beautiful descriptions and settings in this. I would paste some examples, but I don't want to spoil them. I also really like the structure. I didn't expect it to be the type of comparative chronicle that it is, and I love how its meaning builds and deepens with each section without making direct references, just simple juxtaposition. Really nice.
Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)